This piece has a great style man, I feel like it could be pushed a little further tho, only because I think something like this has the potential to really blow people away
Edit: Sorry you feel you're in a bad way man, the world can feel pretty binary right now, how there's only right and wrong and nothing in between.
I suppose for the piece I like the scratchy marks, it makes the piece feel frantic. I thought adding some kind of background to the piece might help it but after seeing the first one you did, maybe the negative space works more effectively for it, idk